समर्थक

गुरुवार, 25 दिसंबर 2008

badmaashi




aa thaam le hath mera
chandni ki rassi hai
chal latak ke chad jaayen
arsh pe
chal ghum ayen
khaalon.n ke bageeche
tu taaze taaze tod de taare
main tokri me rakhti jaaun...
chal shaitan baccho
ke jaise sab
ulat pulat kar de..
main 'earth' uthati
hun tu 'mars' utha le
ek duje ki jgah pe
chal dono ko rakh de...
'venus' ki gend
bana lengetu jeb
me rakh le....
chal bhaag chale.n
ab jaldi se
suraj chowkidaar danda
leke aata hoga......
-----aanch--------

9 टिप्‍पणियां:

Deep in ur heart ने कहा…

behatareen...... shaitaaniyo ke liye ek naya mukaam haansil kiya hein aapne....

श्रद्धा जैन ने कहा…

bahut hi alag tarah ki kavita
khyaal aur grahon ka anutha sangam
aanch aap bhaut achha aur alag likhti hai

pravah ने कहा…

bahut hi alag tarah ki rachna hai aanch ji
aisi badmashi kabhi dekhi na suni
aur ye badmashi ap hi dono ke bas ki hai

kintu ek shikayat hai
main yahaan kahaaniyan dhundhta aaya tha
kintu yahaan nazm mil rahi hai


regards
pravah

nazmo ने कहा…

..tu bhi apni aankho ke saaye se baat kar,
baat kar khud se ..
ittefaqan kah ke

zabardatsi baat kar ...

jab gir jaae doop pedo se
aur ug aae parinde...
wahan...

wahan aasun ki dali rakhi hai ...
pi lena ...

Harash Mahajan ने कहा…

Ek khoobsoorat rachna


Harash

स्वप्निल कुमार 'आतिश' ने कहा…

aaj mera bhi dil kiya aane ka ... :)

pravah ने कहा…

aaj ke bad shayad shafaq tak ana mushkil ho jaye aur jat jate sabse thodi thodi bat karte hue ja raha hun ! aap ki koi rachana shafaq pe nahi mili ! to yahaan aa gaya !
atish bandhu aur aap se umr me bada hun halanki man me aap logon ke liye shardhha hi hai ! kintu fir bhi jate jate meri shubhkamnayen aur ashirwad hain jeevan me nayi unchaiyon ko paiye prasann rahiye ! ishwar se yahi prarthana rahegi ki aap dono sadaiv sath rahen !
-vida

संजय भास्कर ने कहा…

ऐसी कवितायें रोज रोज पढने को नहीं मिलती...इतनी भावपूर्ण कवितायें लिखने के लिए आप को बधाई...शब्द शब्द दिल में उतर गयी.

Avinash Chandra ने कहा…

:)

sweet...so sweet

Pahle padhi thi shayad shafaq par (not sure)...aaj bhi utni hi meethi